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What do you think of TV commercials? Do they tell the truth?

In this morden society, TV is a important and usual media. Many people use TV to transmit the news. These commercials can make people know more products. I found more and more new products in today's advanced technological world.The commercials market is booming. This is a way that improves the marketing rate of new products.However,There are many bad businessman. They sell cheap or inferior products in order to protect their income.They use different ways to make up those products,and make those products look like quality products.Then people can't resist the temptation from eyewashs of inferior products.

What do you think of TV commercials? Do they tell the truth?
你是要说电视里播放的广告吧?..
那应该是
What do you think of commercials on TV? Do they tell the truth?

In this morden society, TV is a important and usual media.
应改成In this morden society, TV is an important and usual consumer media 解释下,Consumer media是指销售方面的宣传工具,用在这里更贴切

Many people use TV to transmit the news. These commercials can make people know more products.

应改成Some manufacturers put their advertisement ad by TV .These commercials can make people know more and more products.

I found more and more new products in today's advanced technological world.The commercials market is booming.

前半句没看明白,sorry

This is a way that improves the marketing rate of new products.However,There are many bad businessman. They sell cheap or inferior products in order to protect their income
应改成This is a way to improve the marketing rate of new products.
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